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Guu and gloomy chibis

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I just don't know why such a cute girl has a very simple name, and appears for most of her series gloomy as the chibis in the image show... aah the wonders of Japanese character design! But OK, a couple of flaws in a character never hurt, you know :D

Maybe I could have made a better drawing of her or the other girls, but this was all I could do for the moment (motivation issues, possible art block).
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1152x1830px 309.92 KB
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HP
Model
HP Scanjet djf4100
Date Taken
Mar 14, 2011, 5:19:55 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Lovely as always, the beautiful pastel colors and soft back ground work well with it. You did good on the clothes and the shading of the main girl with only two minor flaws, 1- the shading on her color bone seemed too deep and it looks as if her neck is pegged into her chest cavity and two when you get a chanpull up a picture of any girl in a skrt and see how the shadows fall to the ground, not just hugging her body lines as yours do.
Now for the chibis. There shading is well as flat as possible and very odd. you never wanna shade half sides completely like that, follow the line of the body and even though there chibis you still wanna shade there clothes and stuff. Also keep in mind where your light sorce is coming from.
From looking at the way you shaded Guu it would seem the light rest centrally above her head an you should shade the chibis accordingly.
It is very cute and the eyes and expressions look adorable. all in all a very adorable picture : )