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First of all, thanks for the 20k pageviews, guys. No longer a kiriban person but just wanting to remember when did I pass that mark. OK, back to business...

Ahhh... what a nice day for fishing, and on a lake that not many fishermen know about but still has plenty of fish to make them happy. Dora could say it with that nice catch, but I think Ludy won't.

Hey, have you noticed that lately I've made too many summer drawings? Not all, but from Flora's twirly dress to now, most of them follow a similar line :o

Oh and before you throw the typical "cute" on your comment, Dora has to tell you something regarding that point: I'M NOT CUTE!!! :rage::rage:rage:

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I really love all the color used in this image. Somehow you managed to keep them very natural looking and still seem bright and cheerful. Regarding color, I think some in the sky would have been nice, even if just a light blue or gray to give it some feeling.

I absolutely love the effect of the water. It's very difficult to draw and you got a very realistic feeling with the soft rippling waves; kudos!

Another thing I love is the fish! A lot of people don't take the time to actually look at things before they draw them, and you got the fins all right! I love the speckled design you gave his skin as well, makes him look very realistic.

The only thing I think could use some work would be the anatomy. I know that you're going for a stylized look here, but their hands still seem very awkward. The one that's holding up the fishing line looks more like he's holding up a dirty sock. If you've ever gone fishing than you probably know that fish are fairly heavy and when you're holding the line you have to grip the whole thing because those fish will be wiggling and flipping and bouncing around. The females hands also seem very small though that isn't quite as noticeable.

Overall, a good job and a very unique look to a bright colorful picture.
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I think you did a good job catching some feel of movement to Dora, it adds interest to the picture

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Pesco uno grande ^^ vamos ella si es linda ^^

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Mmm... OK por esta vez te lo pasa porque apenas le está entrando el "no soy linda" :lol:

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Thanks! Yeah she was really lucky with that catch :D

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lol =)

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Pensé que esas rayas blancas eran las gotas de agua que dejaba el pez hasta que i que también habían cerca de Ludy :confused:

Jeje, me gustó la cara de "te gané" de Dora :D

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No, son las rayas que el agua deja al correr. Si los peces no suelen nadar tan cerca de la superficie o tal vez Ludy hubiera tenido más suerte :XD:

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Great, nice catch ^^
Congratulations 20 000, I too waiting for it :iconspinplz:
This art is special in my opinion, have very cool wekkend and friendly atmosphere and this is very cool :winner:
:iconyitzin:
Thanks for the congrats! Though your closest kiriban (that's how they're called) will be 5,000, but if you're still active you'll reach 20k or more too.

Yes, they're having a nice weekend. You might see that Ludy is sad because she hasn't caught anything but eventually she did :D

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